五、每日佳作赏析
directions:for this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled . the celebration of western festivals . you shoule write at least 120 words following the outline given below in chinese :
1.现在国内有不少人喜欢过西方的某些节日。
2.产生这种现象的原因。
3.这种现象可能带来的影响。
范文
in recent years many chinese people like to celebrate western festivals . even some youngsters are paying (1①) as great attention to christmas (1②) as our spring festival . (2①) in addition , other western festivals , like april fool's day and valentine's day , are very popular among chinese people .
(3)many reasons contribute to this pheno-menon . among them , relaxing and comfortable atmosphere from westem festivals plays a crtitcal role . (2②)moreover , more and more chinese people begin to leam english , (4)which provides them with more chances to (5) be exposed to westm culture and festivals . (2③) besides , many businessmen desperatcly try to boost the atmosphere of foreign festivals to attract more customers .
(6)as far as i am concemed , our paying too much attention to western festivals will (7) bring some side effects . the popularity of western festivals (8) to some extent has influence our traditions . (2④) therefore , i suggest that people should (9①) not (10) be immersed too much in the western festivals (9②) but ingore chinese traditional festivals .
点评
(1)意为“和……一样”， 同级比较。
(2)街接词语使文章条理清晰、意思连贯。
(3)引出原因常用句式。
(4)which引导非限制性定语从句。
(5)意为“暴露于”。
(6)用于引出个人观点。
(7)意为“带来负面影响”。
(8)意为“在某种程度上”。
(9)意为“不是……而是……”，连接并列结构。
(10)意为“过分沉浸在……中”。