五、每日佳作赏析
directions:for this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic getting to know the world outside the campus . you should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline given below in chinese :
1. 大学生了解社会的必要性。
2.了解社会的途径（大众媒介、社会服务等）。
3.你打算怎么做。
范文
getting to know the world outside the campus
it (1) is of great significance for a college student to know the world outside the campus . in this (2) fast-developing "information age" , college students mut (3) keep pace with the progress of the word . (4①) additionally , by contacting the off-campus world , college students can have chance to get more practical skills .
(4②) therefore , (5) how to know the world outside the campus (6) is worth our attention
many ways can be adopted by our college students to increase our knowiedge of the worle . (4③) firstly , mass media , such as radios , televisions , newspapers and the intemet , are a good choice , (7) by which we can (8) be well informed about what is hppening . (4④) secondly , providing volunteer services is an efficient way to contact and know the society . (4⑤) thirdly , we can take part-time jobs to increase our practical experience .
(4⑥) as for me , i will try to create and grasp more chances to contact the society . in my opinion , getting to know the off-campus world is (9①) as important (9②) as improving academic performance . (4⑦) therefore , i suggest every college student should (10①) not (11) confine himself to the campus (10②) but often go outside .
点评
(1)“be of + n .”相当于“be + adj .”。
(2)复合形容词做定语，意为“迅速发展的”。
(3)意为“跟随上”。
(4)街接词语使文章条理清晰、意思连贯。
(5)“疑问词+不定式”结构充当主语。
(6)be wirth sth / doing sth .意为“值得……”。
(7)which 在定语从句中充当介词宾语。
(8)inform是及物动词，意为“通知，告知”经常用作被动结构“be informed about / of ”.
(9)同级比较结构。
(10)连接并列结构，意为“不是……而是……”。
(11)意为“将自己司限于”。