五、每日佳作赏析
directions : for this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled should one expect a reward when doing a good deed ? you should write at least 120 words following the outline give below in chinese :
1.有人做好事期望得到回报。
2.有人认为应该像雷锋那样做好事不图回报。
3.你的观点。
范文
nowadays , (1) different people bold different veews about whether or not one should expect a reward when doing a good deed . some people think that a good deed should be given a certain reward . they say it is agreeable with the rule of fairness . (2①) also , rewards can stimulate people's enthusiasm to do good deeds .
(3)however , there are many others who take leifeng as a model and be always ready to help others (4) without expecting any reward . everyone may be in trouble . (5) only if you help others unselfishly , you can get others' help when you need it . (2②) besides , they maintain that one can enjoy happiness in doing good deeds , (6) they think , (7) which is the best return .
(8)weighing up these two arguments , i prefer the second one . (2③) frist , being happy to help others is one of chinese people's traditiomal virtues . (2④) second , this virtue (9) is of more significance for the creation of a harmonious society . (2⑤) to conclude , (10①) it is every citizen's responsibility (10②) to do good deeds without expecting any reward .
点评
(1)用于引出对某事物的不同观点。
(2)街接词语使文章条理清晰、意思连贯。
(3)转折引出另一种观点。
(4)意为“不期望任何回报”，介词短语充当状语，注意此处without的用法。
(5)意为“只要”，引导条件状语从句。
(6)插入语。
(7)which引导非限制性定语从句。
(8)用于引出个人观点，weigh up意为“权衡”。
(9)"be of + n"相当于"be + adj"。
(10)固定句式：it is …for sb .+ to do sth .其中it是形式主语，不定式短语是实际的主语。