五、每日佳作赏析
directions : for this part , you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic haste makes waste . you should write at least 120 words , and bese your composition on the outline given below in chinese :
1.为什么说“欲速则不达”？
2.试举例说明。
范文
the proverb " haste makes waste " has been widely accepted for many years . it reminds us that if we are to achieve our final goal we have to do it in a (1) down-to-earth way . (2) the truth of it is deep and profound .
(3) there are numerous examples supporting this argument . (4) a case in point is the ancient chinese story of (5) " helping the shoots grow by pulling ". this story proved that the haste caused not only waste but great loss . (6) for another example , some parents and teachers , (7①) in order to improve children's academic performance in a short time , tend to put too heavy burden on children . this , (7②) as a result , bring the children (8) nothing but great pressure .
(9) all the above-mentioned tells us that we shouldn't (10) be over anxious for quick results . everything has its own (11) developing law . therefore , (12) whatever we do , we should not pay too much attention to the speen and ignore these laws .
点评
(1)意为“脚踏实地”。
(2)意为“其中蕴涵着深远的道理”。
(3)用于引出例证。
(4)意为“典型的例子”。
(5)引用“”拔苗助长”的故事。
(6)用于引出另外的例子。
(7)插入语。
(8)意为“只是，仅仅”。
(9)常用于得出结论。
(10)意为“急于求成”。
(11)意为“发展规律”。
(12)引导让步状语从句，意为“无论什么”。