星期五 叙事类和应用类作文结构
一、叙事类作文结构公式
四级写作中涉及的叙事类作文一般是要求考生叙述一个事件发生的经过，如车祸、生病或一次难忘的经历，然后谈谈自己的感受或得到的启示。
例（2003年9月）
directions : for this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic tth day classmate fell ill ( or got injured ) . you should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in chinese :
1.简单叙述一下这位贮存器学生病（或受伤）的情况。
2.同学、老师和你是如何帮助他/她的。
3.人与人之间的这种相互关爱你的感受是……
1.常见结构公式陈列
第一段 交代事件背景
(1)引出事件。
(2)进一步描述背景情况或概述事件的特点。
(3)由背景引出具体事件或说明事件的重要性。
第一段 交代事件背景
(1)主题句：总述事件发生的背景。
(2)扩展句一：进一步描述背景情况或概述事件的特点。
(3)扩展句二：由背景引出具体事件或说明事件的重要性。
第二段 叙述事件经过
(4)now i still remember clearly 引出事件。/ there is one thing that is still vivid in my mind until now .
(5)事件发生的时间和当时的情形。
(6)接下来的情况。
(7)进一步的发展。
(8)as a result / however , 事件结果。
第二段 叙述事件经过
(4)主题句：概括引出要讲述的事件。
(5)扩展句一：交代情件发生的时间和当时的情况。
(6)扩展句二：描述接下来的情况。
(7)扩展句三：描述事件的结果或影响。
(8)结尾句：说明事件的结果或影响。
第三段 谈谈个人感受
(9)every time i recall 该事件，“我”的感受或得到的启示。/该事件left me in deep thought / gave me a significant lesson .
(10)第一点感受。
(11)第二点感受。
第三段 谈谈个人感受
(9)“我”由这件事而引发的感受或得到的启示。
(10)扩展句一：“我”的第一点感受。
(11)扩展句二：“我”的第二点感受。
2.结构公式真题演示
例（2005年6月）
directions : for this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay in honor of teachers on the occasion of teacher's day . you should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in chinese :
1.向老师致以节日祝贺。
2.从一件难忘的事回忆老师的教诲和无私的奉献。
3.我如何报答老师的关爱……
参考范文
honor for my teacher
(1) the once per year's teacher's day will come soon . (2) on this special occasion , all of us students should express our respect and love to our teachers . (3) and i especially want to take this opportunity to show my thanks to my dearest teacher , mr.li.
(4) there in one thing that is still vivid in my mind until now . (5) that was in 2001 , when the sars was on . (6) unfortunately , i was in hospital for a severe cold . (7) though the doctor had proved i was just suffering from a normal cold , few students or teachers would like to come to see me . (8) however , mr.li came to see me every day and cared about me until i recovered .
(9) every time i remind that experience , i feel deeply his unselfish love and devoting spirit . (10) i must return him with my practical actions . (11) i will , as he does , give others love and help when they are in tuouble . i believe that is what he expects me most .