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英语四级写作计划第一周第5天(4):叙事类投诉信结构公式

2.投诉信结构公式

右上角:日期
左上角:称呼
正文:
第一段:表明自己的身份,说明写信目的,因何事投诉何人或机构。
第二段:具体阐述投诉的内容和投诉的理由。
第三段:提出解决建议并期望尽快解决,表示感谢。
右下角:署名

例(2002年1月)
directions : for this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic a letter to the university president about the canteen service on campus . you should write at least 120 words , and base your composition on the outline given below in chinese :

假如你是李明,请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信,内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境和服务等,可是以表扬,可以是批评建议,也可以兼而有之。

参考范文
a letter to the university president about the canteen service on campus

dec.20 , 2009

dear president ,

my name is li ming . i am a junior from the civil engineering school . i venture to write you a letter to make a complaint about the canteen service of our school .

the focus of the complaint is the poor quality and high price of the food . on one hand , the rice is very hard , the steam bread is often cold , and the vegetables are always overcooked . on the other hand , the price of the food is so high that many poor students are burdened heavily . under these circumstances , i find it impossible for us students to fully concentrate on the study and enjoy the campus life .

i will be very obliged if you can consider my complaint seriously . i do hope the service of the canteen will be much improved as soon as possible . thank you for your time and kind consideration .

sincerely yours ,

li ming