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英语四级写作计划第一周第6天(2):复习类范文

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test 1
框架搭建:由标题和提纲所列内容可知,本文应为一篇说明现象类作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段描述大学校园内举办“选秀”活动的情况;第二段说明校园“选秀”活动带来的影响;第三段谈谈个人对“选秀”活动的看法。

talent-search show on campus

in recent years , there has been a talent-search craze on college campus .various talent-search shows , like " campus superstar competition " , " happy boy " , have emerged one after another on campus . moreover , these activities are almost the copies of those social talent shows from the form to the contents .

as everyone sees , talent shows are bringing great influence on college students . above all , these activities enrich students' after-class life and provide a good stage for students to show themselves . also , by attending these activities , college students can improve their abilities in social cimmunication . however , talent shows have brought some negative effects . for instance , most activities have monotonous form and lack creativity , which influence to some degree the whole culture atmosphere on campus .

form my point of view , college students need cultural and amusement activities like talent shows , but the overall quality of these activities should be improved . the activity organizers should increase the activity feature and take full account . with the improvement in quality , i believe , talent shows will go in playing an important role in college students' life .

test 2
框架搭建:由标题和提纲所列内容可知,本文应为一篇对策方法类作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段提出信息安全问题并描述其主要表现;第二段说明信息安全事故可能导致的危害;第三段说明应该如何解决信息安全问题。

information security

in recent years , information security has aroused widespread concem . with our stepping into information society , computer crimes keep rising and information security incidents occur frequently . hackers , fraudsters and serious white-coolar ariminals emerge on the intemet in an endless stream .

it is very clear that information security incidents are bringing great harm to the victims , including govermment departments , organizations , institutions and individuals . first of all , government may suffer from national security threats . with the help of computers and the internet , spies and some weak-minded officials can disclose satate secrets via more advanced skills . furthermore , companies may lose important trade secrets ; the public's and users' comfidence will be damaged .

considering seriousness of the problem , we should pay more attention to infor-mation security . firstly , technology plays a vital role in solving this problem . since no system can ever be absolutely safe , both prevention and detection techniques are necessary to information security management . finally , organizations and companies should promote the awareness on information secunity to its staff . only in this way can information security be guaranteed .

test 3
框架搭建:由标题和提纲所列内容可知,本文应为一篇对比分析类作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段简要介绍网络文学的出现背景以及网络文学的做优点;第二段分析网络文学的缺点;第三段谈谈信人对网络文学的看法。

network literature

nowadays with the widespread of intemet , network literature , as a new literature form , has gained much popularity . compared with traditional literature , network literature has many advantages . above all , it is easier to become popular , whether in terms of its form or its contents . in addition , with intemet as its media , network literature has a stronger expressive force and a quicker spreading .

as every coin has two sides , network literature has also some disadvantages . for one thing , the creation of network literature goes towards fawning on common , of which we can find limited classic ones . for another , the administration and supervision on network literature are still not very sound and effective .

weighing up the advantages and disadvantages of network literature , i think it is a beneficial supplement to traditional literature . undoubtedly , internet , as the media of network literature , provides a wider space for spreading and developing liteerature . but it is worth noting that many network literature works are written in a rough way . therefore , people should have a good selection when reading literature works on line .

test 4
框架搭建:由标题和提纲所列内容可知,本文应为一封道歉信,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段说明道歉缘由(没能参加弟弟的毕业典礼)并向弟弟表达真诚的歉意;第二段详细解释没能参加典礼的原因;第三段再次表达歉意并提出弥补建议。

an apology letter

july 5,2011

dear brother ,

i am excessively sorry that i can't attend your graduation ceremony as i have promised . now , i am writing you this letter to show my deep regret . please accept my sincere apology with gratitude . i hope you will understand me and excuse me for my being absent .

i will be very grateful if you are kind enough to listen to my explanation . the reason why i can't attend your graduation ceremony is that i have already been arranged to attend a meeting next week in nanjing . i have no way out because the things i have to do are of great importance to my company . therefore , it's not in my power to comply with your request .

naturally , i would like to show my apology in person next month . i shall be obliged if you will kindly write and tell me when and where you will meet me next month . once again , i would like to express my sincere apology for any inconvenience caused . hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation .

sincerely yours ,

liu yuan

test 5
框架搭建:由标题和提纲所列内容可知,本文应为叙事类作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段描述吵架的背景,引出吵架当天的情景;第二段具体叙述吵架的原因、经过及结果;第三段谈谈个人感受以及从这次吵架中吸取的教训。

a quarrel in the dormitory

weeks ago , i witnessed a quarrel between my two roommates . it shocked me that two good friends fell out just for a very trifling matter .

i was in the morning at a weekend , when i was washing my face in the bathroom . suddenly i heard xu lan and wu xin shouting at each other . i hurried to come out to see what happened . it turned out the noise of wu xin's closing the door waked xu lan . xu lan thought wu xin deliberately closed the door heavily . wu xin didn't admit her fault . so they had a bitter quarrel . though later they stopped quarreling under our persuasion , neither of them would like to apologize .

such a quarrel leaves me to think a lot about dormitory harmony . if either xu lan or wu xin can be a littel tolerant or take a better way to express herself , this quarrel , i think , can be avoided easily . it is no doubt that a harmonious dormitory life benefits all the members , but it meeds our common efforts to build it .

test 6
框架搭建:由标题和提纲所列内容可知,本文应为一篇对比分析类作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段引出应对流言蜚语的两种方式:申辩和保持沉默;第二段对比阐述两种方法各自的理由;第三段表明自己更倾向于哪种方法并说明理由。

explain or keep silence ?

nowadays , it is very difficult to avoid rumors and slanders completely , espe-cially to those celebrities . some people maintain that when one suffers from rumors , he should come out to make explanation and defense for himself , while others argue that the best way is to keep silence . as to me , i am if favor of the former in rumors .

of course , sometimes silence can help reduce people's interest in rumors . also , after a period of time , rumors might disappear naturally in the face of the truth . but it is worth noting that in most cases , silence doesn't work in getting rid of rumors but increase people's uncertainty and suspicion .

from my point of view , facing rumors , one should stand up bravely to defend himself rather than say nothing to them . the following reasons can support my argument . first , it is your explanation that helps others leam the truth . second , rumors often go round very quickly , and your silence will foster its further spread .

test 7
框架搭建:由标题和提纲所列内容可知,本文应为一篇图表阐释类作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段根据图表简要描述近几年报考研究生人数的变化;第二段说明报考研究生人数生发变化的原因;第三段谈谈个人对考研热的看法。

rush for postgraduate study

according to the table , it is clear that there is a sharp increase in number of postgraduate candidates in x province from 2000 to 2008 . in 2000 , there were only 1,600 candidates participating in the exam . however , 2 years later , the number increased to 5,600 . and by 2008 it has reached 52,000 .

there are many reasons accounting for the great change . firstly , the tough competition in the job market pressure on the job market , which stimulates many students to turn to further education . secondly , many students with equivalent education background to college graduates are allowed to apply for postgraduate study . finally , the society has a greater demand for the postgraduates with the economic development .

as far as i am concerned , dollege students should take full account before deciding to further their education . for one thing , postgraduate study does not neccessarily ensure us a bright future . for another , it's tough process to prepare for the exam for postgraduate study and not everyone can stick it out .

test 8
框架搭建:由标题和提纲所列内容可知,本文应为一篇论证观点类作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段解释“早起的鸟儿有虫吃”这一谚语包含的道理;第二段论证其中的道理;第三段重申该谚语中的道理,提出建议或期望。

early bird catches the worm

the proverb " early bird catches the worm " has been generally accepted . it tells us that if you do something early or before anyone else , you will have an advantage and be successful . the truth of it is self-evident .

there are numerous examples supporting this argument . a case in point is that students usually make two to three years' preparation before their overseas study . this is close to suggest an early preparation increases the possibility of success . for another example , dhl , an express company , was the first company in its field to extend its business to china . the proverb " early bird catches the worm " words on dhl which now holds a larger market share .

judging from the evidence offered , we might safely draw the conclusion that the earlier one does something , the more chances one will succeed . but what is worth noting is that we should set a correct goal before our carly preparation . to conclude , we should take the idiom " early bird catches the worm " as our guidance in the daily life and work .