四、每日佳作赏析
directions : for this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topec green food . you should write at least 120 words , and base your composition on the outline given below in chinese :
1.近年来，“绿色食品”变得越来越流行。
2.分析这种现象产生的原因。
3.你对该现象的看法。
范文
as more and more people focus on health diet , green food has begun to (1) draw more and more attention by the public . in recent years , the market demand for green food has (2) increased dramatically , and all kinds of green food have (3) emerged in an endless stream . (4) why does green food become so popular in china ? (5①) above all , (6) compared with ordinary food , green food is healthier , safer and more nutritious . (5②) moreover , nowadays , many vegetables are polluted because of the usage of agricultural chemicals , (7) while green food is free of pollution . (5③) besides , (8) with the improvement of the living standards , more people can afford a healthier but more expensive lifestyle . so green food , (9) despite its higher price , still becomes people's favorite food .
(5④) however , nowadays the market is full of real and fake green food , (10) making many consurners confused . (5⑤) therefore , the govemment must strengthen the supervision and administration of green food market . (5⑥) besides , consumers should increase the knowledge of green food . (11) only in this way can green food play a more positive role in people's life .
点评
(1)意为“引起越来越多的公众注意”。
(2)意为“显著地增加”。
(3)意为“层出不穷”。
(4)引出原因时常用的句式。
(5)衔接词语使文章条理清晰、意思连贯。
(6)过去分词智短语作状语。意为“与……相比”。
(7)while表示对比。
(8)意为“随着生活水平价格较高”。
(9)插入语，意为“尽管价格较高”。
(10)现在分词智短语做状语。
(11)倒装句，“only +状语”提前引起。