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test 1
框架搭建：由标题和提纲所列内容可知，本文应为一篇对比分析类作文，其基本的段落安排如下：第一段指出人们对旅行方式的不责骂偏好：有人喜欢独自旅行，有人喜欢结伴旅行；第二段对比阐述独自旅行和结伴旅行各自的好处；第三段表明“你”更喜欢于哪种旅行方式，并说明理由。
travel alone or travel with a companion ?
第一段：提出观点段
when it comes to traveling way , different people will offer different opinions . some people like to travel alone , while others prefer to travel with a companion . of course , everyone has his consideration for his preference .
第二段：对比论证段
traveling alone , one can enjoy more freedom . the traveler can arrange his tour as he wishes without the trouble of humoning others . moreover , traveling alone tends to bring the traveler unexpected surprise , such as making a new friend and enjoying a different scenery . compared with traveling alone , traveling with a companion has also its advantages . for one thing , the group members can help and look after each other in the journey . for another , traveling with others who have the same interest , he can share costs and experiences with them .
第三段：总结观点段
as for me , i prefer to travel with a companion . firstly , we can deal with possible problems and diffculties in the journey . secondly , i like to share the pleasure of traveling with others . in sum , both traveling alone and traveling with a companion have their attractions , and you can find the pleasure from either one .
test 2
框架搭建：由标题和提纲所列内容可知，本文应为一篇论证观点类作文，其基本的段落安排如下：第一段由“永不言弃”引出应该学会放弃的观点；第二段从正反两方面论证该观点；第三段重申适当放弃的必要性，总结全文。
learn to give up wisely
第一段：提出观点段
" never give up " has been accepted by many people as a positive life attitude . it is no denying that persistence often plays an important role in one's success . however , in many cases , to give up might be wiser than blind persistence .
第二段：论证观点段
the following reasons can support this argument . firstly , sometimes our goal may be unrealistic . if we insist it blindly , it will finally bring us nothing but failure . at this time , we should give up the original goal and reset a more practical one . secondly , not all persistence can bring deserving results . for a very simple example , if we keep waiting in line for hours only to have a lunch , maybe it is unworthy . finally , to give up wisely do not mean admitting failure . in stead , it does mean a new hope of success .
第三段：总结观点段
considering the above-mentioned , we can come to the conclusion that to give up wisely is a kind of more mature lfie attitude . though giving up sometimes is painful and costly , in the long run , what we gain will definitely far outweigh what we lose .
test 3
框架搭建：由标题和提纲所列内容可知，本文应为一篇对策方法类作文，其基本的段落安排如下：第一段描述近年来患抑郁症的人越来越多的问题现状及主要原因；第二段说明抑郁症带来的危害；第三段说明人们应该如何摆脱抑郁症。
how to deal with depression
第一段：概述问题段
in recent years more and more people have suffered from depression . with the increasingly fierce competition , more and more people are taking great pressure from study , work and life , under great pressure , many people begin to become sad , hopeless and finally suffer from depression .
第二段：说明危害段
depression has brought great bad influence on one's study , work and life . in fact , depression affects not only one's mind but also his body . those with severe depression even cannot work or carry out normal activities . they might have feelings of sadness , hopelessness , not wanting food and trouble sleeping . besides , depression has been linked to other disorders , including heart disease . what's worse , depression is one of the main reasons that people kill themselves .
第三段：说明方法段
considering the bad effects of depression , it must be taken more seriously . first of all , the patients with depression should accept treatment timely instead of covering or ignoring the disease . actually , the best treatment is a combination of medication and psychological help . besides , people should learn to release pressure and relax themselves .
test 4
框架搭建：由标题和提纲所列内容可知，本文应为一篇说明现象类作文，其基本的段落安排如下：第一段描述中国放宽高考考生年龄和婚姻限制的现象；第二段说明该现象带来的好处；第三段分析该现象可能带来的问题。
education for all
第一段：概述现象段
nowadays , in china , the limit to candidates for college entrance examination is not so strict as before . people of all ages and even married people can take the examination and have a chance of becoming a college student .
第二段：说明好处段
the deregulation has many advantages . firstly , it provides more people with chances to receive higher education . there are many people who have once lost the chance to enter a college for some reason . now they can peck up their old dreams of being a college student . secondly , it will introduce more students with different backgrounds and abilities for colleges and universities . finally , it stimulates competition and promotes the candidates to work harder .
第三段：说明害处段
however , reaxing the limit of age and marriage might bring some problems . for one thing , married students have to take care of their family and children , which brings more difficulties for school management . for another , there might be a gap between the elder students and other students . therefore , society and schools should pay more attention to the enrollment of those married people and people of other age groups .
test 5
框架搭建：由标题和提纲所列内容可知，本文应为一篇对比分析类作文，其基本的段落安排如下：第一段提出两种对立观点：知足常乐和不满足于现状才能进步；第二段对比阐述两种观点各自的理由；第三段表明个人倾向并阐述理由。
does happiness lie in contentment ?
第一段：提出观点段
there is an old saying which goes " happiness lies in contentment " . some people take it as a doctrine and believe they should learn to be content with their present situation , while others maintain that only discontentment can bring constant improvement .
第二段：对比论证段
those who hold the former opinion say that one person , who is content with profits and position he has gotten , has a more peaceful state of mind and knows more about how to enjoy life . also , in their opinions , contentment can hold back one's greed and evil desires . however , many others do not agree this . they think that being xatisfied with things as they are will make one accept mediocrity and lose initiative , and finally lead to unhappiness but not happiness .
第三段：总结观点段
weighing these two arguments , i prefer the latter one . from my point of view , contentment can not bring permanent happiness , and " happiness lies in contentment " is an excusr of those lazy and coward people . besides , discontentment is a motivation to promote further improvement . therefore , we should never be content with our present achievement but should improve ourselves constantly .
test 6
框架搭建：由标题和提纲所列内容可知，本文应为一篇对比分析类作文，其基本的段落安排如下：第一段旨出大学生在宿舍做生意的现象，说明该现象带来的好处；第二段说明大学生在宿舍做生意会带来的危害；第三段表明“我”对这一现象的看法，给出建议。
should college students do business in the dormitory ?
第一段：说明好处段
in this economic era , some college students with a good business sense have started thier own business like opening a grocery store or a duplicating shop in the dormitory . it is no doubt that dong business brings about some benefits to these students . they can earn more money to ease the burden of their families . what's more , it helps them be more imdependent and understand their parents' hardships in raising them .
第二段：说明危害段
however , every coin has two sides . doing business do some harm to the students . above all , spending too much time on business will undoubtedly influence the students' normal study . beside , since the dormitory does not belong to one individual , one's business will surely disturb his roommates' rest , which will lead to the disharmonious atmosphere .
第三段：总结观点段
in my opinion , college students' starting a business should be allowed and supported . by doing so , they can gain precious experience , and at the same time provide their fellow students with convenience . but it is worth noting that those students shouldn't ignore thier study and should avoid disturbing other students .
test 7
框架搭建：由标题和提纲所列内容可知，本文应为一篇对策方法类作文，其基本的段落安排如下：第一段提出大学生缺乏感恩意识这一问题；第二段分析感恩意识缺失的原因；第三段说明如何让大学生学会感恩。
learn to be grateful
第一段：概述问题段
nowadays quite a few college students lack consciousness of being grateful . they tend to take such things for granted as parents' supporting them , teachers' helping them , and waiters' serving them . they are even mean to say " thank you " . this phenomenon has caused great attention from the whole society .
第二段：说明原因段
the following reasons can account for the lack of gratefulness consciousness . first of all , unsound family education plays an important role . morst parents tend to pay too much attention to children's academic performance , but ignore their value orientation . moreover , schools don't input enough time and money in moral education . besides , nowadays college students get so much love that they are insensitive to others' care and help .
第三段：说明方法段
considering the seriousness of the problem , it is high time to take effective measures to strengthen college students' consciousness of being grateful . first , parents should improve self-quality and influence children by their own behaviors . second , society and schools must increase input in moral education . finally , we should learn to express our gratefulness to people around us , just beginning with a simple " thank you ".
test 8
框架搭建：由标题和提纲所列内容可知，本文应为一篇说明现象类作文，其基本的段落安排如下：第一段描述近年来人们热衷于参加健身俱乐部或健身中心的现象；第二段说明人们健身的主要目的；第三段谈谈“你”对健身的看法。
body-building
第一段：概述现象段
in recent years , more and more people have joined in the body-building group . people begin to take part in various fitness clubs or fitness centers in their spare time . body-building has become an indispensable part of many people's life .
第二段：说明原因段
why are so many people keen on body-building ? firstly , keeping health is one of their main purposes . in modern society , many people work with their brains most of the day . they want to improve their health by body-building . secondly , quite a few people , especially the women , go to the gym in order to keep a good figure . many setting-up exercises like aerobics are very helpful in cutting up weight . besides , body-building is a good way by which many people release pressure .
第三段：总结观点段
as far as i am concerned , the popularity of body-building will be a long-time trend . it shows people begin to pay more and more attention to life quality . as a fashionable , healthy life style , body-building will attract more and more people .