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英语四级写作计划第三周第2天(2):如何合理搭配长短句类短句的用法

二、短句的用法

长句固然能表达出复杂而缜密的思想,但如果片面追求复杂句式,华而不实,反而成为表达的累赘。因此,写作中句子的长短应根据表达的需要,有话则长,无话则短。

短句比较简洁、明快、有力、适合陈述重要的事实或想法。短句不仅指句子长度较短,也指句子内部结构精炼。

如:
原句:many automobile parts that are made of plastics and other synthetic materials do not last long .
优化:many automobile parts made of plastics and other synthetic materials do not last long .
原句:he didn't have enough experience , which is the reason why he didn't do the work well .
优化:he didn't do the work well for lack of experience .