三、长短句变换练习
要求：将下列长句或短句进行优化改写，使其更符合表达需求。
1.if students who wish to have overseas academic experience have got the chances and financial resources , they should scize the opportunity to go abroad and broaden their vision , while if conditions don't permit them to go abroad , they can pursue their studies at top universities in our country .
2.china's seven-day labor day and the national day holidays now is entering their seventh . the possibility of cancelling the holidays , usually called " golden week " , has become a widely discussed topic .
3.they argue that " golden week " is very effective . it introduces the idea of vacation travel to chinese .
4.firstly , a lot of visitors swarm into scenic spots suddenly . it will bring environmental stress .
5.the meaning of his statement is that he is of the opinion that the death penalty should be allowed .
6.thirdly , after " golden week " , the number of tourists declines greatly . it results in the serious imbalance in travel industry . it does not really boost travel industry in a long run .
7.we need more flexible holidays . thus we can satisfy the traveling desire of chinese people . at the same time , we can avoid huge consumption imbalance between the " golden week " and usual times .
8.people who choose to further their studies abroad insist that if they go to study overseas they can get many benefits in different ways .
9.the place where they study is not very important for them , and instead , it is what they can learn that is the most important .
10.second , if they complete part or all of their education overseas , they can gain a broader of different perspective on their field of study .
参考答案
1.if students who wish to have overseas academic experience have got the chances and financial resources , they should seize the opportunity to go abroad and broaden their vision . on the other hand , if conditions don't permit , they can pursue their studies at top universities in our country /
2.with china's seven-day labor day and the national day holidays now entering their seventh , the possibility of cancelling the holidays , usually called " golden week " has become a widely discussed topic .
3.they argue that " golden week " is very effective in introducing the idea of vacation travel to chinese .
4.firstly , the sudden swarming of visitors will bring environmental stress on scenic spots .
5.he theinks that the death penalty should be allowed .
6.thirdly , after " golden week " ,the number of tourists declines greatly , which results in the serious imbalance in travel industry instead of really boosting travel industry in a long run .
7.we need more flexible holidays to satisfy the traveling desire of chinese people and avoid huge consumption imbalance between the " golden week " and usual times .
8.people who choose to further their studies abroad insist that overseas study can benefit them in different ways .
9.what counts is not the place where they study , but what they can learn . / it is not the place where they study but what they can learn that counts .
10.second , completing part or all of their education overseas helps them gain a broader of different perspective on their field of study .