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英语四级写作计划第三周第6天:复习效果检验

星期六 一周复习效果检验

test 1
directions : for this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic why do people like to buy lotteries ? you should write at least 120 words , and base your composition on the outline given below in chinese :
1.社会上有许多人喜欢购买彩票。
2.分析产生这种现象的原因。
3.提出你的建议。

test 2
directions : for this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic does e-mail make people closer or drift apart ? you should write at least 120 words , and base your composition on the outline given below in chinese :
1.现在用传统的纸笔写信的人越来越少,取而代之的是电子邮件。
2.有人认为电子邮件的出现使人与人之间的关系更加疏远了,但也有人认为正好相反。
3.你对此的看法是……

test 3
directions : for this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic parental hopes and personal ideals . you should write at least 120 words , and base your composition on the outline given below in chinese :
1.父母都会望子成龙,但父母的期望有时会与孩子的理想发生矛盾。
2.分析产生这种矛盾的原因。
3.应该如何解决这一矛盾?

test 4
directions : for this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic holiday economy . you should write at least 120 words , and base your composition on the outline given below in chinese :
1.对于由长假引发的假日经济人们一直存在争议。
2.很多人认为假日经济的负面作用更大。
3.你对此的看法是……

test 5
directions : for this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic the advantages of trying new things . you should write at least 120 words , and base your composition on the outline given below in chinese :
1.有时候我们需要勇于尝试新鲜事物。
2.试论证这样做的好处。

test 6
directions : for this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic are traditional virtues out of date . you should write at least 120 words , and base your composition on the outline given below in chinese :
1.现在人们的传统价值观发生了很大的变化,一些人认为传统美德已经过时了。
2.你不同意这种观点,理由是……

test 7
directions : for this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled should china loosen its one-chlld policy ? you should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in chinese :
1.现在,我国放宽了独生子女政策。
2.但也有人认为应该坚持独生子女政策。
3.谈谈“我”的看法。

test 8
directions : for this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic how to confront a disaster . you should write at least 120 words , and base your composition on the outline given below in chinese :
1.地震、海啸(tsunami)、飓风(hurricane)等自然灾难经常会不期而至。
2.导致这些灾害的原因在哪些?
3.面对这些灾难,我们应该怎么做?

参考范文

test 1
框架搭建:由标题和提纲所列内容可知,本文应为一篇说明现象类作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段描述当前社会上人们热衷于购买彩标的现象;第二段说明导致人们购买彩票的原因;第三段针对购买彩票提出几点“我”的建议。

why do people like to buy lotteries ?

nowadays , there exist all kinds of lotteries in our society , such as welfare lottery , sports lottery , computer lottery , and so forth . anyone , whether men or women , the old or the young , may buy lottery tickets . but why do quite a few people like buying them ?

the following reasons can account for the popularity of lotteries . first of all , most people are trying their luck on lottery tickets . they have a long-cherished dream of making big money over night . in addition , there are some people who want to make donation to public welfare by buying lottery tickets . besides , some people buy them just for fun .

as far as i am concerned , there are some risks in buying lotteries . people should never sount on making big money by buying lotteries . furthermore , lotteries to some extent are similar to gambling , so people should not spend too much money on them . in a word , people should keep a clear head when buying lotteries .

test 2
框架搭建:由标题和提纲所列内容可知,本文应为一篇分析类作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段描述引出人们对电子邮件对人与人之间关系的影响的不同观点;第二段比阐述两种观点各自的理由;第三段表明个人倾向并说明理由。

does e-mail make people closer or drift apart ?

nowadays more and more people are exchanging a great variety of information by using electronic mails instead of traditional way of mailing letters . some people think that e-mail makes relationships among people closer , while some others maintain that it makes people drift apart .

those who hold the former opinion insist that the appearance of e-mail we can deliver more information including pictures and sounds . however , some others think e-mail , with the same format and the print font , includes less emotion than traditional letters written by hand . most of people use e-mails to deliver information instead of feelings .

prom my point of view , e-mail does bring great convenience for people , but it is not a better way to express our feeling than traditional letters . our handwriting can deliver much feeling . therefore , when you want to express your love and care , writing a letter by hand is a wise choice .

test 3
框架搭建:由标题和提纲所列内容可知,本文应为一篇对策方法类作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段描述父母的期望和孩子的理想之间的矛盾;第二段说明产生这种矛盾的主要原因;第三段说明解决这一矛盾的办法。

parental hopes and personal ideals

all parents hope their children will have a bright future . however , parents ' expectations for theri children are sometimes conflicting with their children's personal ideals . this is often a main cause of the gaps between parents and children . but what lead to the conflict between parental hopes and personal ideals ?

the following three factors contribute to the conflict . first of all , in this fast-changing society , parents and children have too many differences in mind . secondly , traditional patriarchy is still influencing chinese parents . they are used to making decisions for their children . third , nowadays young people have strong independence , who want to plan their own future .

in order to solve the conflict , both parents and children should pay their efforts . for one thing , parents should give their children rights to make their own decisions . they may help their children make choices instead of replacing them to make choices . for another , children should learn to respect their parents' advices . as long as both parents and children learn to think from the other side's point of view , the conflicts between them can be avoided .

test 4
框架搭建:由标题和提纲所列内容可知,本文应为一篇对比分析类作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段指出人们对假日经济的争议;第二段对比阐述争议双方各自的理由;第三段表明个人对假日经济的看法并说明理由。

holiday economy

as wee , the extended holidays have caused unexpected great travel craze and brisk economic activities . but there are many debates on the advantages and disadvantages of this kind of holiday economy .

many people , especially some economists are in favor of the holiday economy . they believe that tourism-based holiday economy has raised consumption and helped to spur the domestic demands . in addition , transportation , catering , hotels and service in dustries become flourishing during long holidays . however , many others hold that the holiday economy do more harm than good . first , the travel craze puts a heavy burden on the traffic system . second , thousands of tourists fold scenic spots , cauing over-crowdedness and safety problems .

as to me , i believe the advantages of holiday economy outweigh its disadvantages . after all , holiday economy greatly benefits the development of our overall economy . but the govemment should take effective measures to reduce the side effects of holiday economy .

test 5
框架搭建:由标题和提纲所列内容可知,本文应为一篇论证观点类作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段提出论点“有时候我们需要尝试新鲜事物”;第二段阐述尝试新鲜事物的好处,论证观点的正确性;第三段重申尝试新鲜事物的必要性,总结全文。

the advantages of trying new things

it is widely accetpted that one is more likely to succeed at things he already knows how to do well . however , to limit ourselves to doing only those things will make us miss many opportunities to develop other interests and skills . therefore , sometimes it is necessary for us to try some new things .

despite the risk of failure in trying nwe things , we can benefit from it . firstly , the process is a rewarding experience , from which we may feel a different world . secondly , even if we fail , we can still absorb experience and lessons ; if it turns out that we succed , we'll get great pleasure and confidence . finally , it is impossible for us to never fail even if we do only what we are familiar with . with experience of trying new things , we can deal with the unexpected situations better .

considering the above-mentioned , we needn't be afraid of trying new things . but it is worth noting that trying new things bravely does not mean acting rashly and blindly . we should take full account before our trying new things .

test 6
框架搭建:由标题和提纲所列内容可知,本文应为一篇对比分析类作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段描述人们传统价值观的变化,引出一些人认为传统美德已经过时的错误看法并说明理由;第二段表明“我”认为传统美德没有过时,并说明理由;第三段再次强调传统美德的重要意义。

are traditional virtues out of date ?

with the development of our society , people's traditional values have changed a lot . many people are inclined to seek after high-quality life and high economic profits . under the influence of these changes , some people come to the conclusion that traditional virtues , like thrift and honesty , are out of date , to which i could give my consent .

though some of traditional virtues are meeting greater challenge than before , most people , as the mainstream of our society , still go after these time-bonored traditional vitrues . in their eyes , high quality life doesn't mean waste . whether in the past , at present or in the future , thrift is everyone's responsibility . in addition , without honesty , our society and economy will fall into disorder ; without mutual help , human society will stop developing soon .

considering the above-mentioned , i think , traditional virtues remain indispensable elements in the chinese character in modern society . therefore , we must strengthen education on traditional virtues . it is only if the whole nation is aware of their eternal value that traditional virtues are likely to take root firmly in our nation's spirits .

test 7
框架搭建:由标题和提纲所列内容可知,本文应为一篇对比分析类作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段指出目前对我国放宽独生子女政策存在的争议;第二段为对比论证争议双方各自的理由;第三段表明“我”对这一问题的看法,并说明理由。

should china loosen its one-chlld policy ?

nowadays , whether china should loosen its one-child policy has aroused a heated debate . some people are in favor of the new policy that if both of the couple are the only child in the family , they can give birth to a second child . however , others take an opposite view .

people who take the former opinion point out that the problems of aging population and the decline of working force will become more serious if china stick to the one-child policy . they argue that loosening the one-child policy can help promote rational growth of population . yet , people who are for the latter opinion firmly believe that the huge population of china will cause the shortage of natural resources and the excessive population .

in my opinion , it is advisable for china to loosen its one-child policy , because it makes the policy more humane . all in all , the government should handle this problem flexibly .

test 8
框架搭建:由标题和提纲所列内容可知,本文应为一篇说明现象类作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段描述目前自然灾害发生的现状和主要危害;第二段说明导致自然灾害增多的原因;第三段说明应该如何预防和应对自然灾害。

how to confront a disaster

natural disasters , like earthquake , tsunami and hurricane , often come unexpectedly . in recent years , there have happened frequently some natural disasters in the world , like china earthquake , the indonesian tsunami . these disasters killed millions of people , destroyed countless homes and fertile land .

but what on earth leads to these natural disasters ? of course , natural variation plays a very important role . however , more and more people become aware that those disasters have much to do with what we have done to the earth . we have cut down too many trees . we have badly polluted the environment . as a result , nature goes up to revenge itself on us .

considering the great destruction of natural disasters , it is urgent for us to do our best to protect our environment so as to prevent the natural disasters . besides , when natural disasters really happen , firstly , we must keep a clear head and try to save ourselves and help others ; secondly , we must unite together and have a firm belief to get through disasters . only in this way can we conquer disasters .