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directions : for this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic craze in famous brands on campus . you should write at least 120 words , and base your composition on the outline given below in chinese :
1.现在很多大学生都热衷于追求名牌。
2.分析这种现象的原因。
3.你如何看待该项现象?
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框架搭建:通过审题可知这是一篇现象类作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段概述大学生热衷名牌的现象;第二段说明导致大学生热衷名牌的原因;第三段谈谈“我”对大学生追求名牌的看法并给出相关建议。
craze in famous brands on campus
in recent years there has been a craze in famous brands among college students . on campus we can see many students dressing in famous brands from head to toe . it is worth more attention that even some students from poor families also begin to join in the army following famous brands .
college students' preference for famous brands is caused mainly by the following factors . above all , in many college students' eyes , a famous brand is a symbol of identity and position . they believe it can show their good taste . what's more , in modern society , famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion , which has a great attraction to young college students . besides , parents' spoiling their children helps form their unhealthy consumption habit .
as far as i am concemed , it is irrational for our college sudents to be crazy about buying famous brands . after all , we have no income source . it is shameful to use our parents' money to satisfy our vanity . therefore , i suggest that we should follow the consumption principle of being practical and thrifty .