热点演练11
directions : for this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic the branch campuses of the universities . you should write at least 120 words , and base your composition on the outline given below in chinese :
1.近看来很多大学都在郊区建立了分校。
2.大学在郊区成立分校的原因有哪些?
3.谈谈你的看法……
参考范文
框架搭建:通过审题可知这是一篇说明现象类作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段概述近年来大学纷纷建立李校的现象;第二段说明导致各大学建立分校的原因;第三段谈谈“我”对大学建立分校的看法并给出相关建议。
the branch campuses of the universities
in recent years many universities have built up their branch campuses in suburban areas . now it is very difficult to find a university without a branch campus . some of them even have more than one branch campus .
these are two main reasons behind this phenomenon . firstly , it is the enrollment expansion of universities that forces universities to build up branch campuses . as more and more freshmen are admitted , the original facilities including classrooms , apartments , dining halls , laboratories , libraries are not enough any more . secondly , the quite environment in suburban areas in more suitable for students to study . so most of branch areas have been located in suburban areas .
as a college student , i think , it is necessary for the university to build up a branch campus . however , the building of branch campuses brings some problems . the students in some branch campuses cannot enjoy good enough facilities and teachers due to limited resources . therefore , the university should take a full account before it decides to build up a branch campus .