热点演练24
directions : for this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic a boom in continuing education . you should write at least 120 words , and base your composition on the outline given below in chinese :
1.根据上图描述某城市1998-2008年参加继续教育的人数变化情况。
2.分析导致该变化的原因。
3.谈谈你对继续教育的看法。
参考范文
框架搭建:通过审题可知这是一篇图表阐释类作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段根据图表中的数据描述1990-2008年继续教育参加人数的增加情况;第二段说明参加继续教育的人数增加的原因;第三段谈谈“我”对继续教育的看法。
a boom in continuing education
from the graph , we can learn the number of participants of continuing deucation has kept increasing from 1998 to 2008 in x city . in 1998 there were only 20 thousand people taking part in continuing education , but by 2007 , it has reached 660 thousand . it can be seen easily that continuing education is gaining its more and more popularity .
the foolowing reasons are responsible for this boom in continuing education . firstly , during the work many people begin to realize what they have learned in schools is far from enough . so they turn to continuing education . moreove , as the science and technology in china are developing very fast , adults after graduation have to refresh themselves . in addition , in modern society , those without bachelor's degree or above are less competitive .
as far as i am concerded , the boom in continuing education is a necessity . it provides those on-job people with chances to get advanced degrees and gain more knowledge . as our society is developing , more and more people will receiver continuing education in the future .