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directions : for this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic man proposes , god disposes . you should write at least 120 words , and base your composition on the outline given below in chinese :
1.如何理解“谋事在人，成事在天”这句谚语。
2.试举例论证其中的道理。
参考范文
框架搭建：通过审题可知这是一篇论证观点类作文，其基本的段落安排如下：第一段解释“谋事在人，成事在天”的含义，阐述其中蕴含的道理；第二段举例论证该道理；第三段重申该谚语的正确性，呼应第一段。
man proposes , god disposes
there is a widespread proverb , " man proposes , god disposes " . which means that the planning lies with man , the outcome with heaven . this proverb reflects a relation between success and luck , that is , we should always work hard in order to achieve our goal , though sometimes we may meet unexpected things .
let me take english study for example . a student spends much time and energy on english , and he has good study habits . he is supposed to receive good grades in the examination . but suppose something unexpected , like illness , occurs , and his final score is far from ideal . should he lose heart and become pessimistic ? of course not . what he should do is just keep it up , and next time luck will most probably favor him .
from my point of view , luck does influence or even dominate us sometimes , but in any case we are the master of our own fortune . it is up to ourselves whether we want to go ahead or backward . as long as you insist working hard , your effort will pay in the long run .