热点演练29
directions : for this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic a food poisoning accident . you should write at least 120 words , and base your composition on the outline given below in chinese :
你的几个同学因食用从某超市买回的食品而中毒，幸亏及时治疗而胶险。请描述他（们）中毒与脱险的过程，并呼吁要加强食品安全。
参考范文
框架搭建：通过审题可知这是一篇记叙文，其基本的段落安排如下：第一段交代食物中毒的背景和原因；第二段叙述中毒和脱险的经过；第三段谈谈由此引发的感想，呼吁加强食品安全。
a food poisoning accident
last month , i witnessed a food poisoning accident happening to my classmates . at that time the situation was really very dangerous and urgent . though finally they got out of danger , this accident is still vivid in my mind .
thta day was julie's birthday . in order to celebrate it , her roommates bought a big birthday cake for her from a supermarket nearby . they shared the cake happily . however , after a while , all of them felt abdominal pain and dizziness . two of them even cannot stand up because of great pain . we rushed to send them to the hospital . it turned out that the cake they ate had expired its guarantee period . fortunately , due to timely treatment , they all recovered very soon .
however , this accident leaves me a deep ponder . i think it is very urgent to take effective measures to improve food safety . on one hand , the govermment should strengthen supervision and administration on iood satety . on the other hand , we consumers should be more careful . only in this way can we make sure that no same accident happens .