Topic 2 2005年6月真题
Directions ： For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a com- position on the topic Say No to Pirated Products. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese ：
目前盗版的现象比较严重
造成这种现象的原因及其危害
我们应该怎么做
Say No to Pirated
Products At present, piracy is becoming unprecedentedly visible in China. Take pirated tapes as an example，according to a recent survey conducted by CPB_Chinese Publishing Bureau, the past 5 years has witnessed a sharp increase in the kind of pirated counterparts from 35,000 to 2,790,000.
To account for this phenomenon, people have come up with various reasons listed below. In the first place，due to the considerably low cost, people who made pirates take risks for the huge profits while people who buy pirates feel satisfied in getting products in low price. What’s more, the government fails to take sufficient measures to prevent it.
Pirates may bring about great harm. It discourages intellectual property rights, hampering the development of better works and products. In addition, the poor quality of pirated products always causes tremendous damage to customers.
It is high time that we took some effective measures to deal withit. The government can establish stricter laws to ban the pirates，producing and spreading and customers should develop consciousness to resist pirated products. ( 173 词)
一句话点评
毫无疑问，第一段的三个数据和大写CPB将吸引阅卷老师的 眼球，同时使用了 conduct, witness, sharp 等好词和 the past 5 years 作主语的拟人修辞，将形成良好的第一印象。
快捷构思
第一段:描述现象，引人该段中心“目前盗版的现象比较严 重”。而后“一句话”数例具体展示。
第二段:模板句展现段落中心“造成这种现象的原因”，并用in the first place和what’s more分层次展现两个原因
第三段:开门见山展现段落中心“盗版有巨大危害”，接下来同 样分层次展开其具体危害。
第四段:直接展现段落中心“我们应该采取措施”，并从govem- ment和customers两个方面提出具体做法，不作更深 层次的展开。
美丽词句
1.unprecedentedly史无前例地（亮点词汇）
2.It discourages intellectual property rights, hampering the development of better works and products.盗版侵犯了 知识产 权、阻碍了好作品的发展。（使用discourage比较形象生 动;hampering分词作伴随状语）
3.It is high time that we took some effective measures to deal with it.(虚拟语气,作文中常出现的句式，可作为模板句）
4.establishstricter laws制定更严格的法律