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英语六级作文分类 比较对照真题范文及点评 17:一封给同学的信

Topic 17 2001年6月真题

Directions; For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write aletter. Suppose you are Zhang Ying. Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the weeklong holiday. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese :

表示欢迎

提出对度假安排的建议

提醒应注意的事项

A Letter to a Schoolmate

June 23,2001
Dear Xiao Wang,

I am happy to hear that you are going to visit me during the week- long holiday. My parents are also quite delighted at the news.

I am sure you will enjoy every minute of your stay here. On the day when you arrive in Shanghai,I will take you to a typical restaurant to taste local food and dishes. On the next four days I will show you around, visiting places of interest such as the People’s Square, the Huangpu River, and the Jinmao Building. You will get a close touch with the most international and modernized city in China. During the last two days,I will accompany you to make purchases on Nanjing Road,which witnesses a flow of travelers as much as 1,350,000 on average every day.

Remember to take your identity card. There is nothing else for you to prepare or worry about.
I am looking forward to your coming and wish you a good journey.
Best re Sards. (164 词)

Yours sincerely, Zhang Ying

“一句话”点评

第二段的一个数据将吸引阅卷老师的眼球,同时witness, a flow of, on average等的使用,无疑增加了文章的亮点。

快捷构思

第一段:开门见山,表达欢迎。第二句则换一个叙述主体表达欢迎。
第二段:开头总结性展望“you will enjoy every minute of your stay here",成为段落中心,接下来具体分3个层次来 陈述对“度假安排的建议”。
第三段:提醒应注意的事项。
第四段:模板句结尾。

美丽词句

1.be quite delighted at对感到很开心(优于常用的behappy with …)

2.enjoy every minute of your stay here 享受待在这里的每分钟 (3 ) place of interest 旅游景点

3.get a close touch with紧密接触,深切感受

4.accompanysb. to make purchases 陪伴某人购物