Topic19 2003年9月真题
Directions : For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reading Preferences. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the table and the outline given below :
根据下表,简要描述美国某大学学生借阅图书的分布情况
你对于这些学生阅读偏爱的评论
你通常喜欢阅读哪一类书籍?说明理由
Reading Preferences
As revealed from the above pie chart on book flow of an American university library, a high proportion (68. 2 percent) of students prefer to read popular novels rather than other kinds of books, while unpopular fictions account for 16.8%,technical books 8.3% and poem collections 5.2% respectively.
There are several factors contributing to this reading preference. To begin with,popular novels are written in plain language so that one can easily read them for entertainment or relaxation. What’s more, books of technology and collections of poems are less appealing in that the former is often complicated and the latter abstract.
As to me,I spend much of my free time reading books in my specialized field—environmental protection. Also, I take great delight in reading nonfiction such as history and biography so as to be wiser and more reasonable. To turn my dream into reality, I must cherish every minute of my life and work hard. (155 词)
“一句话”点评
很显然,第一段的数据抓住了阅卷老师的眼球。同时使用了 reveal, while, a proportion of, account for 等好词、短语,无疑增力口了 亮点。注意:本文为图表作文,可以把“一句话”放在第一段的第一 句,直接列举出图表中的数例。
快捷构思
第一段:开门见山,直接用“一句话”数例描述“美国某大学学 生借阅图书的分布情况”。
第二段:以模板句提出该段中心:对于这些学生阅读偏爱的评 论(实际就是形成这些阅读习惯的原因),to begin with 和what’s more分别引出两个原因。
第三段:分两个层次直接展现自己的阅读习惯,并提出一个简 要的原因。
美丽词句
1.plain language简单易懂的语言
2.Books of technology and collections of poems are less appealing in that the former is often complicated and the latter abstract.(实际上in that = because,相当于一个原因状语从 句。同时the latter abstract承前省略了谓语动词,使表达 更简洁。be less appealing吸引力更小。)
3.takegreat delight in 十分热衷于...
4.turnone’s dream into reality将某人的梦想变成现实
5.cherish every minute of my life 珍惜生命中的每~^分钟