Topic 1 Lectures and Discussions
1.一些学生赞成讲座式教学
2.另一些学生偏爱讨论式教学
3.我的看法
Lectures and Discussions
As regards the choice between lectures and discussions, there has been a heated discussion among the college students in campus. Students who lend their support to lectures arfflie that lectures save their time and energy, helping them leam and absorb more quickly. What’s more,their vision can be broadened to get in touch with a more majority of knowledge.
By contrast, others hold that discussions are of greater necessity. According to a recent survey conducted by China Daily,a high proportion (83. 8 percent) of students admit that discussions help them develop the ability to analyze and solve problems, stimulating their creativities. In addition,students’ ability of communication can be enhanced,which is absolutely beneficial to their future career.
As far as I am concerned, both lectures and discussions have respective advantages. The former is better for big class and knowledge-oriented subjects, while the latter is suitable for small class and skill-oriented subjects. (154 词)
一句话”点评
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快捷构思
第一段:在模板句引人话题后接着提出首段中心“一些学生赞 成讲座式教学”,并用 save their time and energy, helping them leam and absorb more quickly 和 their vision can be broadened to get in touch with a more majority of knowledge两个原因来支持段落中心。
第二段:开门见山展现段落中心“另一些学生偏爱讨论式教 学”。而后“一句话”数例为具体现象展示,说明讨论 式教学能够形成学生分析、解决问题的能力,激发他 们的创造力,实际也是个原因支持。最后呈现另一个 并列的原因:增强了学生沟通交流的能力。
第三段:直接展现自己的“骑墙派”观点,句型也相对固定,且 不作更深层次的展开。
美丽词句
1.get in touch with 接触
2.amajority of大多数、大部分
3.theability to analyze and solve problems 分析和解决问题的 能力
4.bebeneficial to 对.......... 有益
5.knowledge-oriented subjects 以知识为导向的学科
6.skill-oriented subjects以技能为导向的学科