Topic 4 Space Exploration
目前人类对太空有了更多的探索
这样做的意义
你认为未来的前景如何
Space Exploration
At present space exploration has been on wings. The year of 2007 solely has witnessed a sharp increase in the money spent on space exploration to an astonishing amount of $ 850,000,000, with scientists in many parts of the world pooling time and efforts to research the space, launch satellites, establish space stations, and even walk on the moon.
Space exploration is of great significance. To begin with，through space exploration，we human being may uncover the unknown resources of the universe, which endows us with knowledge about the origin of life. What’s more，space exploration also provides some practical application in fields such as media communication, biological and chemical industry, which，in a long run, will undoubtedly bring ffleat benefits to our daily life. In addition，it offers a platform for nations to cooperate through participation in joint breakthrough.
In the near future，more nations will get involved in the course of space exploration. Some questions having intrigued human throughout the centuries are to be in the list of solution. (170 词）
一句话点评
很显然，第一段的数据抓住了阅卷老师的眼球。同时使用了witness, sharp等好词和the year of 2007作主语的修辞手法，为文章 增加了亮点。
快捷构思
第一段:描述现象，引人该段中心“目前人类对太空有了更多 的探索”。而后“一句话”数例为具体现象展示,说明 花在太空探索上的资金很多。
第二段:直接展现该段中心“这样做的意义”，接着用uncover the unknown resources of the universe 和 provides some practical application in fields such as media communication, biological and chemical industry 两点来支持。
第三段:直接展现自己的观点，并提出一个简要的原因，不作 更深层次的展开。
美丽词句
1.with scientists in many parts of the world pooling time and efforts to research the space, launch satellites, establish space stations，and even walk on the moon.(高分句式， research the space，launch satellites, establish space stations 和walk on the moon四个并列短语的运用，增加了文章亮 点。）
2. beof great significance 很重要（优于常用的表达:very significant)
3.in a long run从长远看来
4.bring great benefits to 带来很大好处
5.get involved in 涉及，牵涉