Topic 6 My Opinion on Campus Lectures
大学校园里的讲座丰富多彩
听讲座的益处
你对在大学校园里听讲座的评论
My Opinion on Campus Lectures
Nowadays, there are great varieties of lectures in campus. Take Beijing Normal University as an example，the past decade has witnessed a sharp increase in the kind of lectures students take up to an astonishing number of 120, ranging from arts to economy, from psychology to world issues.
Generally speaking, the advantages of good lectures are various. To begin with, lectures broaden the students’ knowledge horizon and cultivate interests in different fields, which will improve the students,quality both mentally and academically. What’s more, lectures make the life of the students more colorful and enjoyable，helping them leam and absorb more quickly.
As for me,with these merits, lectures are just complementary and subordinate to our school work. If students spend too much time attending lectures，their regular study will be affected and disturbed. Therefore ,lectures should be done within a certain limit so that we can strike a proper balance between instructive lectures and study. (156 词）
一句话点评
毫无疑问,第一段的一个数据将吸引阅卷老师的眼球，同时使 用了 decade, witness, sharp等好词和ranging分词作伴随状语，将 形成良好的第一印象。
快捷构思
第一段:描述现象，引人该段中心“大学校园里的讲座丰富多彩”。而后“一句话”数例为具体现象展示，举出例子 更加形象地说明讲座的种类很多,从文学到经济，从 心理学到世界形势。
第二段：直接展现该段中心“听讲座的益处”。紧接着用 broaden the students’ knowledge horizon and cultivate interests in different fields 和 make the life of the students more colorful and enjoyable, helping them learn and absorb more quickly为原因来支持该中心。
第三段:直接展现自己对大学校园里听讲座的评论，并提出一 个简要的原因，不作更深层次的展开。最后提出建议：lectures should be done within a certain limit so that we can strike a proper balance between instructive lectures and study o
美丽词句
1.great varieties of 很多种
2.broaden the students’ knowledge horizon 拓宽学生的知识面
3.cultivateinterests in different fields 培养不同领域的兴趣
4.Lectures make the life of the students more colorful and enjoyable, helping them leam and absorb more quickly.讲座让学 生的生活更加多彩、有趣，有助于他们学习和掌握得更快。(helping作伴随状语，属亮点句式。）
5.strike a proper balance between... and ...两者之间保持恰当的平衡