Topic7 On Qualification-Obtaining Fever
校园“考证热”的队伍不断壮大，很多学生忙于考取各种资格证书
大学生忙于考证的利弊
你的观点
On Qualification-Obtaining Fever
Currently, there is a long-lasting fever of obtaining a variety of qualifications and certificates among college students. According to a recent survey conducted by China Daily，a high proportion (86. 7 percent) of students admit that they spend their weekends and summer vacation in preparing for tests on English, Law and Computer Science and so on.
It goes without saying that qualification-obtaining have both advantages and disadvantages. To begin with, qualifications have attractions of their own which are evidences to confirm students’ abilities. In addition, work-related or competence-based qualifications may even help graduates find a satisfactory job, so students are actually not obtaining credentials but opportunities for their future. However，obtaining qualifications also brings negative effects. Paying too much attention on qualification-obtaining will not only squeeze students’ time that should be spent on their normal study but also give rise to financial burden.
From my point of view，what matters most is relevant experience or skill instead of the number of credentials you have obtained. (166 词）
“一句话”点评
毫无疑问，第一段的China Daily和数据将吸引阅卷老师的眼 球，同时使用了 conduct, a high proportion of等好词和短语，同时， admit后紧跟宾语从句，将形成良好的第一印象。
快捷构思
第一段:描述现象，引人该段中心“校园‘考证热’的队伍 不断壮大，很多学生忙于考取各种资格证书”。而 后“一句话”数例为具体现象展示，更加形象地说 明越来越多的人利用周末和假期考取各种资格证书。
第二段:模板句展现段落中心“大学生忙考证的利”。并用confirm students’ abilities 和 help graduates find a satisfactory job来支持这一中心。而后，用however转折， 引出大学生考证的弊端:不仅花费时间，还增加了经济负担。
第三段:直接展现自己的观点，并提出一个简要的原因，不作 更深层次的展开。
美丽词句
1.a long-lasting fever 持续的热潮
2.a variety of很多种（优于常用的kinds of)
3.confirmstudents’ abilities 证明学生的能力
4.a satisfactory job 满意的工作
5.squeezestudents’ time挤时间（squeeze是高分词汇，增加亮 点）
6.giverise to 引起，导致