Topic 9 Volunteer Teaching in the West
每年，高校许多大学生受到鼓舞去贫困地区支教
支教活动的意义
我的看法
Volunteer Teaching in the West
Every year, college students are inspired to help students with their study in underdeveloped areas in China. According to The National Education Ministry，the past 5 years has witnessed more than 520,000 college students who have been trying their best to offer teaching service to those students who are so eager to leam.
This volunteer practice has been beneficial in two aspects. To begin with, college volunteers have opened the eyes of students in underdeveloped regions to the outside world by bringing them new knowl-edge and thoughts. What’s more，college students themselves have received a rigorous training by adapting to the harsh living conditions. They are learning how to deal with difficulties and face challenges as well.
As for me, every Chinese citizen is responsible for the develop-ment of education in China. And we college students should take the lead in response to the appeal for offering aid to children in poor areas. (153 词）
“一句话”点评
很显然,第一段的大写字母National Education Ministry和数据 抓住了阅卷老师的眼球。同时使用了 witness等好词和定语从句， 无疑增加了亮点。
快捷构思
第一段:描述现象，引入该段中心“高校许多大学生受到鼓舞 去贫困地区支教”。而后“一句话”数例为具体现象展 示，说明过去五年很多大学生都选择去贫困地区支 教。
第二段:直接展现该段中心“支教活动的意义”。紧接着列出 了 college volunteers have opened the eyes of students in underdeveloped regions to the outside world by bringing them new knowledge and thoughts 和 college students themselves have received a rigorous training by adapting to the harsh living conditions 这两个意义。
第三段:直接展现自己的观点，认为大学生应该响应号召，帮 助贫困地区的孩子。
美丽词句
1.be inspired to 鼓励，激励
2.be eager to 渴望
3.a? rigorous training 严格的训练
4.harsh living conditions 艰苦的生活环境
5.be?responsible for 对........ 负责任
6.offer aid to 提供帮助