Topic 10 Internet and Privacy
网络已经入侵到我们生活的所有角落
At present, Internet is becoming unprecedentedly visible in our life. According to a recent survey conducted by China Daily, a high proportion (76. 7 percent) of people admit that they get in touch with Internet, communicating through E-mail, MSN or QQ, playing games and enjoying music，looking for and exchanging informa-tion.
Personal privacy has become a part of the contents of Internet. To begin with，to enjoy the service, we have to register with many web-sites ，typing in our name，age, gender，address，and telephone num-ber, which may be made open by some “professional” hackers and irresponsible website administrators. In addition, the privacy of pop stars and high-rank officials may always draw the attention of the gener-al public.
Internet has a great impact on our private life. While enjoying the great convenience Internet brings us, we are called sometimes by stran-gers, visited by promotions and junk ads, and cheated by someone unexpectedly. Therefore，think twice before deciding to register on-line. (161 词）
“一句话”点评
很显然，第一段的China AuV和百分比将吸引阅卷老师的眼 球，同时使用了 conduct，a high proportion of等好词和短语，同时， admit后紧跟宾语从句，将形成良好的第一印象。
快捷构思
第一段:开门见山表达该段中心“网络已经人侵到我们 所有角落”。而后“一句话”数例为具体现象j 加形象地说明越来越多的人接触网络。
第二段:直接展现段落中心“个人隐私也已经成为网绰 一部分”。接下来用我们在网上注册年龄、性别、住址 等个人信息后被专业的黑客盗取来支持这一中心。
第三段:直接展现段落中心“网络对我们的私人生活产生的影 响”：网络在带给我们方便的同时,一些垃圾广告、陌 生人也会打扰我们的生活。最后，给出建议：There- fore, think twice before deciding to register on-line.
美丽词句
1.unprecedentedly史无前例地（高分词汇）
2.register??? with 注册
3. draw the attention of 吸引注意
4.have a great impact on 对?? 有很大的影响
5.While?enjoying the great convenience internet brings us, we are called sometimes by strangers, visited by promotions and junk ads, and cheated by someone unexpectedly.(高分句 式，既用了被动语态，又用了并列的短语，是值得推荐的一 种好句式。）