Topic 11 On College Students Supporting Rural Construction
现在政府鼓励大学生毕业后投身农村基层建设，担任大学 生村官
产生这一现象的原因
我的看法
On College Students Supporting Rural Construction
Nowadays, college graduates are encouraged to find jobs in rural area to support its construction. According to a recent survey con-ducted by CCTV, the last year has witnessed a number of 2，450 college graduates acting as village officials.
To account for this phenomenon, people have come up with vari-ous reasons listed below. To begin with, there is an urgent need of brains in the countryside. Actually, the root of poverty in those regions is the lack of knowledge. Therefore，talents importing is the first step to the success of the development. Secondly，with the expansion of col-lege enrollment, the job market becomes more and more competitive. Graduates find themselves difficult to get a satisfactory job in the urban area especially in big cities.
As far as I am concerned, I firmly believe that with the great efforts of the government and the student workers, the rural region will be well developed and become better off in the near future. (159 词）
“一句话”点评
很显然，第一段的大写字母CCTV和数据抓住了阅卷老师的眼 球。同时使用了 witness等好词和acting分词作后置定语，the last year作主语的修辞手法，增加了文章的亮点。
快捷构思
第一段:描述现象，引入该段中心“现在政府鼓励大学生毕业 后投身农村基层建设，担任大学生村官”。而后“一句 话”数例为具体现象展示,举出例子更加形象地说明 有一部分大学生去担任村官。
第二段:以模板句提出该段中心“产生这一现象的原因”，接着 分层列出不同原因：an urgent need of brains in the cou-ntryside 和 the job market becomes more and more com-petitive 来支持该中心。
第三段:直接展现自己观点，并提出一个简要的原因，不做更 深层次的展开。
美丽词句
1.be encouraged to 受鼓励
2.urgent?need of brains 紧急缺少人才
3.the? root of poverty 贫困的根源
4. the expansion of college enrollment 大学扩招
5. get a satisfactory job 收获一份满意工作