Topic 13 My Viewpoint on Wide-spread SMS
现在越来越多的年轻人把手机短信作为交流的主要渠道
使用手机短信的利与弊
我的观点
My Viewpoint on Wide-spread SMS
Nowadays，more and more young people use SMS as their major communication channel. According to a recent survey conducted by China Daily, a high proportion (87. 5 percent) of college students admit that they send more than 10 SMS per day.
It goes without saying that SMS has advantages. To begin with，with the tip of finger，messages including words, digital pictures and music can be sent to another user within seconds. What’s more， compared with making calls, SMS is much cheaper because it takes only 0. 1 RMB per message. However, garbage messages are quite annoying，and there are an increasing number of victims who have been cheated or fooled by them.
As for me，I prefer using this way of communication. But I also hope some measures should be taken to punish those who spread gar-bage messages so that we can enjoy the modem information technology safely and happily. (150 词）
一句话点评
很显然，第一段的China Daily和数字将吸引阅卷老师的眼球， 同时还使用了 conduct, a high proportion of, admit等好词和短语， 为文章增加了亮点。
快捷抅思
第一段:首句指出“现在越来越多的年轻人把手机短信作为交 流的主要渠道。”接着以“一句话”数例来论证，进行补 充说明。
第二段:首先分两方面阐述使用手机短信的好处;接着以How- ever进行转折,指出其反面的影响。正反对比鲜明，而 又有侧重点，论述清晰。
第三段:提出个人的看法，并提出合理的建议。
美丽词句
1.It?goes without saying that ...毫无疑问..
2.annoying恼人的，讨厌的