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同邻居交涉他们看足球赛影响自己学习-2004高考英语满分作文附名师点评[广东卷]

【2004高考英语广东卷作文题目】假设你是下图的李华。请根据图画所提供的信息,写一篇英语作文,描述昨天晚上邻居看足球赛影响你学习的情况,并描写你随后与邻居交涉的过程(如:你向邻居提出要求,对方向你表示歉意等。)

  注意:1. 词数:80—120
  2. 可以编写对话或其它叙述方式描写你与邻居的交涉过程

About 9 o'clock last night, I was doing my homework. Suddenly I heard my neighbor shouting and laughing loudly. He was watching a football game on TV. I couldn't go on studying and became impatient. I covered my ears, trying to keep the noises out, but failed. So I had to go my neighbor.
  
I knocked at his door and said," Good evening, Mr. Yang! Could you please turn down your TV a bit? I am doing my homework.'
  
“Oh, I'm really sorry to have disturbed you. We'll do as you say.” My neighbor said politely.
  
“Thank you very much..” I said and went back to continue my study.
  
[名师点评]
这篇文章从整体上来看,内容完整,要点齐全。在准确领悟题意的基础上,用平实的语言,将文章娓娓道来,连贯而流畅。句式搭配长短结合。文章对对话的描写,很生动,让人有种身临其境的感觉。