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写信建议美国朋友参加学中文唱中文歌大赛-2004年高考英语全国卷I满分作文及名师点评

【2004年全国卷i高考英语作文试题回放】假设你是李华,你在报上看到北京电视台今年七月将举办外国人“学中文,唱中文歌”才艺大赛。你的美国朋友peter正在北京一所大学学中文,你觉得他应去试一试。请按以下要点给他写信告知此事,并表示可以提供帮助。

比赛时间:7 月18日 。报名时间:截止到6月30日。报名地点:北京电视台
注意:1.词数:100左右 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯 3.参考词汇:才艺大赛—talent show

dear peter,
i read in a newspaper today that a “learn chinese, sing chinese songs” foreigners’ talent show will be held in beijing television station on july 18. i know you like singing, and you are in beijing during that period. i think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned chinese. if you would like to try, you' u have to go to the tv station to sign up before the end of june. if there is anything i can do for you, i would be more than glad to help.
yours,
li hua

[名师点评]
从整体上说,本文书写得简洁明快。语言简单平实,要点囊括齐全,结构完整。本文的主要特点是让步状语从句的使用,最后两句话,采用了if引导的让步状语从句,结合将来时使用。