2013山东高考英语作文题目:
假设你是新华中学的学生李华,你的美国朋友tom一周前给你发电子邮件,询问你暑假里的打算,但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回邮件:
1. 未及时回复的原因;
2. 你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。
注意: 1. 字数:120~150;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【试题点评】
今年的书面表达题目延续山东省一贯的提纲作文命题习惯,时隔一年之后重新回到“书信题”的大框架中,考了一篇“以道歉信为外衣,以活动安排为主体段”的提纲作文,相当于10年山东卷(道歉信)和07年四川卷(假期安排)和合体。这种作文是我们平时经常练习的,因此套路很完善、套话很丰富。此外,本文中需要同学们翻译的难句不多,因此,只要在备考过程中有意识地了解过高考英语作文的提分方法,掌握了常用的亮点词汇、加分句型和过渡词,并加以针对性训练,这道题目应该不难写。
【经典套路】
第一段:问候+写信背景+写信目的
第二段:“道歉”部分(相当于“写信背景”)
第三段:“假期安排”部分
第四段:补充说明+客套话
【山东高考英语满分作文】
dear tom,
how are you doing? (问候) youasked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming summer vacation。(写信背景) i am sorry that i didn’t reply withoutdelay。(写信目的)
how i wish i would read and reply youremail as soon as i received it. however, i was busy preparing for my final examat that time, which is vital for me. as a result, i had no choice but tocompletely focus on my study. i believe that if you were me, you would make thesame choice。(第二段为道歉信常见套路)
by the way, i have a busy schedule for mysummer vacation。(主题句) first and foremost, i would do apart time job, so that my interpersonal skills would be improved。(拓展句1)
additionally, i will take a short trip to beijing to take a summer course inthe new oriental school。(拓展句2) last but not least, maybe i will work as avolunteer for the school as a teaching assistant。(拓展句3)
these are my plan for the summer vacation.what’s yours? i am looking forward to your earliest reply。(以合理的客套话结尾)