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英语专业八级改错练习题及答案解析106

英语专业八级改错练习题及答案解析106

sporting activities are essentially modified forms of hunting behavior.

viewing biologically, the modern footballer is revealed as a member of a disguised __1__

hunting pack. his killing weapon has turned into a harmless football

and his prey into a goal-mouth. if his aim is inaccurate and he scores a goal, __2__

enjoys the hunter’s triumph of killing his prey. __3__

to understand how this transformation has taken place we

must briefly look up at our ancient ancestors. they spent over a million __4__

year evolving as co-operative hunters. their very survival depended on success __5__

in the hunting-field. under this pressure their whole way of life, even if their __6__

bodies, became radically changed. they became chasers, runners, jumpers,

aimers, throwers and prey-killers. they co-operate as skillful male-group __7__

attackers.

then, about ten thousand years ago, when this immensely long formative __8__

period of hunting for food, they became farmers. their improved intelligence,

so vital to their old hunting life, were put to a new use—that of penning, __9__

controlling and domesticating their prey. the food was there on the farms,

awaiting their needs. the risks and uncertainties of farming were no longer __10__

essential for survival.


参考答案及解析:

1. 将viewing改为viewed

非谓语动词view和句子的主语是逻辑动宾关系。

2 .将inaccurate改为accurate

如果真的目标不准确,也就不可能进球了(he scores a goal)。

3 .在enjoys前面加he

由于前面if his aim is accurate and he scores a goal 是条件状语从句,因此可见这里是主句,主句的主语he是不可以省略的。

4 .将look up at的up省略

5 .将year变为复数

6 .将if去掉

7 .将co-operate 改为co-operated

8 .将when改为after

9.将were改为was

该谓语动词的主语是their improved intelligence,是单数。

10. 将farming改为hunting

纵观全文,在从事种植业后,“狩猎”而不是“农耕”的危险和不确定性对人们的生存已经不再那么重要了。