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托福写作常见50个病句分析(2)


  26. eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

  改进: the best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

  27. smoking can help you relax your mind.

  改进: cigarettes can help you relax.

  28. what's about nonsmokers?

  改进: what about nonsmokers?

  29. why not to be a non-smoker?

  改进: why not be a non-smoker?

  30. everyone will have many friends in his life.

  改进: everyone has friends in his life.

  31. i am not good at maths, but english

  改进: i am good not at mathematics but at english/ my strength is not mathematics but english.

  32. who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

  改进: who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

  33.it is children who clear about their interests.

  改进: it is children who are clear about their own interests.

  34. i agree the latter idea.

  改进: i agree with the latter idea.

  35. many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

  改进: many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

  36. so i feel breathe more comfortably now.

  改进: so i feel more comfortable now when i breathe.

  37. people should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

  改进:people should learn no matter how old they are/ people are never too old to learn.

  38. no one knows all the things.

  改进: no one knows everything.

  39. i want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

  改进: i want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

  40. each form ofshavingsfriends has its advantages.

  改进: each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

  41. i was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

  改进: i was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply.

  42. luckily, he recognized an american professor.

  改进: luckily, he knew an american professor.

  43. they will learn the bad habits.

  改进: they will develop bad habits.

  44. in this continued process, people make progress.

  改进: in this cycle, people make progress.

  45. lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

  改进: lastly, higher education means higher salary.

  46. by making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

  改进: by making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

  47. a wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

  改进: a wrong decision will bring even worse result.

  48. you spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

  改进: you devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

  49. children should be taught disciplines insgroupsto avoid unnecessary lost.

  改进: children should be taught discipline insgroupsto avoid unnecessary loss.

  50. i felt alone.

  改进: i felt lonely.

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