「句1」he had left a note of welcome for me,as sunny as his face.
他留下一封短信,对我表示欢迎。那信的字里行间充满了热情洋溢,一如其人。
face和note作比较,sunny不仅修饰face,还修饰note.所以要把sunny和welcome联系起来,同时note和face相照应,比如“信写得热情洋溢,一如其人”。
「句2」他们的斗争是很得人心的。
their struggles have the great support of the people.
这段文章出现了三次“国内外”,要分别译成“nationally and internationaly”,“nationwide and overseas”,“both at home and abroad”,这样不会用词重复,而缺乏文采。