名人教英文:dangling modifiers垂悬修饰语
modifier(修饰语)是用来修饰句中其他部分的字词、短语或子句,其中一类用以修饰名词,这类修饰语包括形容词、形容词短语和形容词子句,例如:
‧形容词:beijing national stadium is an impressive building.
‧形容词短语:opened in 2008, beijing national stadium has hosted a lot of major sports events.
‧形容词子句:beijing national stadium, which was opened in 2008, has hosted a lot of major sports events.
第二句把形容词短语放在句首,这个句型相当常见,但不少人运用此句型时会犯一个错误,就是没有把修饰语和正确的修饰对象连在一起。这种错误叫dangling modifiers(垂悬修饰语/不连结的修饰语)。例如:
(错误)once identified, we can fix the problem quickly.
这句主语是we,但前面的once identified(一被识别出来)不是用来形容we,而是用来形容the problem。改写这句的方法有两个:
(正确)将主语改成the problem:once identified, the problem can be fixed quickly.
(正确)将形容词短语改写成有清楚主语的副词子句:once the problem has been identified, we can fix it quickly.
再举一例:
(错误)to get a better grade, my essay has been revised twice.
想要取得更好成绩的理应是i,而不是my essay。此外,这句用了passive voice,没有清楚交代是谁修改了文章,语意含糊,并不理想。因此,这句应该改为:
(正确)to get a better grade, i have revised my essay twice.
最后一例:
(错误)after re-elected as us president, obama's opponents continued to attack his healthcare reform package.
连任总统的是obama,可是这句的主语并非obama,而是obama's opponents。正确写法是:
(正确)after obama was re-elected as us president, his opponents continued to attack his healthcare reform package.
总括而言,只要记住句首的形容词短语是用来修饰句子的主语,就可避免这类错误。